Homework
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Hi Penny,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What do you like about your community? Answer in complete sentences.
ANSWER:
I frequently used to go to the our community\'s library
There are many useful and helpful books that were not getting easily things in small library such as professional in field
I would like to recommend this center Because lf many children and middle school students should go to there. Maybe get to the knowledge and wisefom from these books.
Also this centet was constructed recently in our community that was tried to promote and invested to build eagerly last two years.
I\'m super proud of my library.
CORRECTIONS:
What I like about our community is the library. I used to go frequently to our community\'s library. There are many useful and helpful books for professionals that we\'re not getting easily in a small library.
I would like to recommend this center so that many children and middle school students will go there. Knowledge and wisdom can be acquired from these books.
This center was constructed recently in our community. They tried to promote the building and invested for it to build it eagerly last two years ago. I\'m super proud of my library.
**Please take note of the corrections.
T. Alexia
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