Homework

Hi Seong Won!

There are some minor corrections in the composition.

Make sure that you take note of them.

I\'m sure you won\'t repeat the same mistakes.

Study well!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Seoul Grand Park is the hot place for the holiday.
>> Seoul Grand Park is the hottest place to go for the holidays. 
It has the zoo which has the most various species of animals in Korea.
>> It has a zoo which holds a variety of animals in Korea.
Also it has botanical garden too.
>> It has a botanical garden, too.
I think I never went there before, but I don\'t want to ho there.
>> I think I have never been there before but I don\'t want to go there now.
I have no interest in zoos.

>> Correct