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2018-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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In Chu seok, We typically back to our home to meet parents and other relatives. We generally prepare some foods for ancestor and hang out together. I think Chu seok provides an opportunity to maintain ties with our family and helps our to remind our tradition.

강사 첨삭

Hi Young! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the Chu Seok holiday celebration. I enjoyed reading your work because it gave me a good view about the essence of the celebration. Enjoy your day!

~~T. Dee :)

In Chu seok, We typically back to our home to meet parents and other relatives.

>>During Chu Seok, we typically visit our hometowns to meet with our parents and other relatives.
We generally prepare some foods for ancestor and hang out together.

>>We generally prepare some food for our ancestors and we also hang out together.

>>OR: We usually prepare some food for ancestors and at the same time we gather as a family.
I think Chu seok provides an opportunity to maintain ties with our family and helps our to remind our tradition.

>>I think, Chu Seok provides an opportunity to maintain ties with our family and helps to remind us about our tradition.

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