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2018-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I prefer to take a trip than stay at home during the long holiday. There are not many chance to have a long holiday so it's a good opportunity to go overseas trip. and Today government provides substitution holiday so holiday get longer. If i stay at home during all holiday , I get bored and go crazy..

강사 첨삭

Good day Young! You\'re impressive on this work. I am glad to see that I could not find any errors on your opening statement. You have a good opening statement for this homework. For the rest, there are just very little corrections. Good work today!

~~T. Dee :)


I prefer to take a trip than stay at home during the long holiday.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I prefer to go on a trip rather than to stay at home during a long holiday.

There are not many chance to have a long holiday so it\'s a good opportunity to go overseas trip.

>>There are no many chances to have long holidays so it\'s a good opportunity to go on an overseas trip.
and Today government provides substitution holiday so holiday get longer.

>>And, nowadays, the government allows substitution of holidays so other holidays can be longer.
If i stay at home during all holiday , I get bored and go crazy..

>>If I\'ll stay at home for the entire duration of the long holiday, I will be bored and go crazy.




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