HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Why do people need hobbies?
A. The advantage of hobbies are: Frist this relieves stress. Second makes happy.
So people need hobbies to happy life.
강사 첨삭
Hi Emily,
Thanks for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Why do people need hobbies?
ANSWER:
The advantage of hobbies are: Frist this relieves stress. Second makes happy.
So people need hobbies to happy life.
CORRECTIONS:
People need hobbies because of these advantages: First, it relieves stress. Second, it makes me happy.
So, people need hobbies for a happy life.
** Hi Emily, please take note of the corrections. ^^
T. Alexia
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