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2018-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I will apologize untill the other person forgive me. I think it is the most general way. I have a friend who always late for 10 minutes for the appointed time. So I told her I will recive 1000 won when you are late. And she never get late again.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I think you are a punctual person.

You\'re the most responsible person I have talked to.

I hope you never change.

Good job on your composition!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I will apologize untill the other person forgive me.
>> I will apologize until the other person forgives me.
I think it is the most general way.
>> I think it is the common way.
I have a friend who always late for 10 minutes for the appointed time.
>> I have a friend who is always late for 10 minutes for any appointed time.
So I told her I will recive 1000 won when you are late.
>> So I told her that she has to give me 1000 won whenever she\'s late.
And she never get late again.

>> She was never late again.

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