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2018-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Where do you and your friends usually go to? In Korea, there are many times when men usually walk with talking with friends without destination. So, when recovering consciousness, they usually inquire "where we are going now?" to each other. Then, with wondering how they get there, they laugh because of this situation and go to near PC room or billiard hall. That situation is the same to me when I meet with friends. Because we usually meet without exact plan, after we meet at location where we promise to see, we wander aimlessly around this location. While asking each other about recent state, we realize that we wander aimlessly. After that, we are become hungry by a lot of discourse on recent state, so that we usually go to near restaurant. In my opinion, men who are Korean have almost nothing to go with their friends except PC room or billiard hall.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. In that case, there must be a lot of PC rooms and billiard halls around areas where young people would usually hang out.

- T. Beth

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In Korea, there are many times when men usually walk with talking with friends without destination.

>>>>  In Korea, there are many times when men usually walk while talking with friends without a specific destination.

So, when recovering consciousness, they usually inquire \"where we are going now?\" to each other.

>>>> So, when they come to our senses, they usually ask each other \"Where are we going now?\"   

Then, with wondering how they get there, they laugh because of this situation and go to near PC room or billiard hall.

>>>> Then, while wondering how they got there, they laugh because of this situation and go to a nearby PC room or billiard hall.   

That situation is the same to me when I meet with friends.

>>>>  OR: This is similar in my case when I meet friends. 

Because we usually meet without exact plan, after we meet at location where we promise to see, we wander aimlessly around this location.

>>>>  Because we usually meet without an exact plan and after meeting at the agreed location, we wander aimlessly around this area.  

While asking each other about recent state, we realize that we wander aimlessly.

>>>> OR: While asking each other about updates, we realized that we wandered aimlessly.  

After that, we are become hungry by a lot of discourse on recent state, so that we usually go to near restaurant.

>>>>  After all the talk, we get hungry and go to a nearby restaurant. 

In my opinion, men who are Korean have almost nothing to go with their friends except PC room or billiard hall.

>>>>  In my opinion, Korean men have almost nothing to go to with their friends except at PC rooms or billiard halls. 

 

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