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2018-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: **Creative Writing: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Answer ;I was told that old england people eating simple food such as a potato or a cereal someting like that. They were eaten simple food very long time ago it was related industry of development. On the another hands, almost Asian did farm work it needs a lot of time to eat. If easier to prepare to food then we have a lot of time for improve our career,life style and development about world

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It has been a long time since I last read your composition. ^^

I appreciate this one. Maybe you have time today.

Thank you for sharing your opinion about it.

Have a good holiday. See you on Thursday!


_Teacher Dianne


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
**Creative Writing: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

>> Correct

 Answer
;I was told that old england people eating simple food such as a potato or a cereal someting like that.

>> I was told that old English people eat simple food such as a potato or cereal.
 They were eaten simple food very long time ago it was related industry of development.

>>  They were eating simple food a very long time ago and it was related to the development of their industry. 
 On the another hands, almost Asian did farm work it needs a lot of time to eat.

>> On the another hand, almost Asian people did farm work and they needed a long time before they can harvest and eat the crops.
 If easier to prepare to food then we have a lot of time for improve our career,life style and development about world

>> If the food is easier to prepare then we will have a lot of time to improve our career, lifestyle, and to develop the world.

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