homework
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Hi, [이름]!
It has been a long time since I last read your composition. ^^
I appreciate this one. Maybe you have time today.
Thank you for sharing your opinion about it.
Have a good holiday. See you on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
**Creative Writing: Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
>> Correct
Answer
;I was told that old england people eating simple food such as a potato or a cereal someting like that.
>> I was told that old English people eat simple food such as a potato or cereal.
They were eaten simple food very long time ago it was related industry of development.
>> They were eating simple food a very long time ago and it was related to the development of their industry.
On the another hands, almost Asian did farm work it needs a lot of time to eat.
>> On the another hand, almost Asian people did farm work and they needed a long time before they can harvest and eat the crops.
If easier to prepare to food then we have a lot of time for improve our career,life style and development about world
>> If the food is easier to prepare then we will have a lot of time to improve our career, lifestyle, and to develop the world.
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