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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. I agree that actors should experience a lot of things to be able to portray a character well. In some cases, some even get into the character that even after finishing shooting the movie, they claim it was difficult to change back into their old self.
- T. Beth
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Actors must understand roles thoroughly regarding performance they undertake.
>>>> Actors must understand the role thoroughly regarding what performance they should undertake.
Without understanding about their roles, they can\'t move mind of audience who watch their performance.
>>>> Without understanding their roles, they won\'t be able to move the mind of the audience who watch their performances.
For example, actors on a movie must assimilate into character in the movie so that audiences mistake fiction story for real one.
>>>> For example, actors must assimilate into character in the movie so that audiences mistake fiction story for a real one.
Although the movies has same story, audiences can receive another feeling depending on actors\' acting.
>>>> OR: Although the movie has the same story, the audience can receive a different feeling depending on the actors\' performance.
So, this is one of the reasons that movie directors choose actors considering mood of a movie.
>>>> So, this is the reason movie directors choose the actors considering the mood they want to convey in the movie.
Because of that, actors must experience many situations in order to assimilate into various movie characters.
>>>> CORRECT.
My cousin is musical actor, but he usually have difficulty to assimilate into his role on musical, so he often drunk in order to solve this stress.
>>>> My cousin is a musical actor, but he usually has difficulty assimilating into his role, so he often drink in order to solve this stress.
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