Homework

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What are the best and the most useful inventions of mankind in the 20th century?
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I think the smart phone is the best useful invention of mankind in the 20th century.

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 Smart phone is very useful in our life because it has a lot of functions.

>>The Smartphone is very useful in our life because it has a lot of functions.
 We can use it by a computer, camera, camcorder, navigator etc.

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 Because of developing the smart phone technology, our life pattern is changed.

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 In my case, I have two camcorder and two camera.

>> In my case, I have two camcorders and two cameras.
 But I don\'t use these equipment nowadays.

>> But I don\'t use this equipment nowadays.
 It is not convenient to carry when I have an event.

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 As you know, smartphone replace these roles and it is very convenient to use and carry.

>>As you know, smartphones replaced these functions and it is very convenient to use and carry smartphones.
 When I do a internet shopping, I had used a computer. But nowadays I use a smart phone application when I do a shopping.

>>When I do internet shopping, I had used a computer. But nowadays, I use a smartphone application when I do a shopping.
 It makes me very easy to buy something when I have to buy something.
>>It is very easy for me to buy something when I have to buy something.
There are another several functions in smart phone. 

>>There are other several functions a smartphone has. 
 Because of these reasons, I think the smart phone is the best invention.

>>For these reasons, I think the smartphone is the best invention.