Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You have made some meaningful sentences here.
You did a good job.
I\'ll call you on Monday!
Have a great weekend!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I don\'t have the person I respect that deeply.
>> I think I don\'t have a person whom I respect that deeply.
Teachers told us to make the role model to accomplish our gole.
>> Our teachers told us to find a role model to accomplish our goals.
Once I had to make a presentation about my role model, and I spent at least 5 hours trying to find the person who is suit to be the role model.
>> Once I had to make a presentation about my role model, and I spent at least 5 hours trying to find the person who was most suited to be a role model.
And I spent 5 hours trying to find the suitable person.
>> I also spent 5 hours trying to find a suitable person.
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