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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning, James !
I\'m glad that you are doing well in English. I commend you for your improvements.
I am more than happy to help you to become much more fluent! ^^
Please, check the corrections that I\'ve made so that you\'ll not commit the same mistake.
~T. Jeny
What problems does the Internet create?
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Nowadays, we cannot live without the internet.
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In my case, I connect to the SKYPE when I wake up for studying English.
>>In my case, I connect to SKYPE when I wake up for studying English.
After that, I connect the NETFLIX by my smartphone and I listen English while I am driving a car to the company.
>>After that, I connect to NETFLIX by my smartphone and I listen to an English conversation while I am driving a car to the company.
And then, I turn on my laptop and I connect the company web page and I start my work in the company.
>>And then, I turn on my laptop and I connect to our company\'s web page and start working.
Almost of my works are connected with the internet.
>>Almost all of my work is connected with the internet.
If I cannot use the internet, I cannot do my works in the company and cannot study English with you.
>> If I cannot use the internet, I cannot do my work in the company and I cannot study English with you.
And we use the smart phone and it makes us to connect the internet easily.
>>Thus we also use the smartphones and we can easily connect it with the internet.
When I was young and there isn\'t a smart phone, if I met my friends, I talk with them about our life.
>> When I was young, there wasn\'t a smartphone, so if I meet my friends, we usually talk about life.
Unfortunately, in present, although young people meet their friends, they talk each other my messenger.
>>At present although young people meet their friends they still talk with each other through messenger.
For the reason, the conversation keeps disconnecting.
>>As a conclusion, there is a continuous conversation.
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