homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How was your holiday? How did you spend it?
I rode the bike with my friends.
I played with my friends for 3 hours.
It was amazing and exciting.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I can say that you really enjoyed your holiday.
I\'m glad that you were able to spend time with your friends.
~T. Kelly^^
How was your holiday? How did you spend it?
I rode the bike with my friends.
>> I rode a bike with my friends.
I played with my friends for 3 hours.
>> Correct.
It was amazing and exciting.
>> Correct.
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