homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day Young! Thank you for completing your homework today. I\'m sad to know that your plan did go as you expected but still it\'s a good thing because nothing bad happened. About the sentences you made today, excellent work! Just be reminded that sentences should always begin in capital letters. Check my corrections below. Have a good day!
~~T. Dee
In this summer , i planed to went to the yangyang which is famous for surfing place with my friends.
>>This summer, my friends and I planned to go to Yangyang, which is a famous place for surfing.
we made a reservation for surfing.
>>We made a reservation for some surfing activities.
however, two days before we leave, they called us to bring news that the surfing was impossible because of the typhoon.
However, two days before the date, they called us to bring the news that surfing was impossible because of the typhoon.
we were really disappointed.
>>We were really disappointed.
furthermore, there was a other big problem.
>>Furthermore, there was a bigger problem.
we booked a accommodation too.
>>We booked for accommodations too.
>>OR: Our accommodation is already set.
we decided to go other area. but they said that we could get back only 10 percent of total amount.
>>We decided to cancel the reservation and go to somewhere else but we could only get back 10 percent of the total amount of payment.
eventually,, we went to yangyang back to our original plan.
>>Eventually, we continued our trip to Yangyang as originally planned.
although it was a little sad , it became a unforgettable memory.
>>Although it was a little sad, it became an unforgettable memory.
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