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Hi Young! Disasters are really unpleasant  to experience, I am glad to know that you are thinking about it  as one of your days of necessity. You have a good perspective. Anyway, about sentence construction, I like to remind you that there are several types of sentences which are simple, compound and complex. It is good to combine sentences with a conjunction if they are related to make one cohesive sentence. Look at the last sentence I corrected on your work so you can see how it is applied. Have a good day!

~~T. Dee :)

Fortunately, my country is particularly not effected strong disaster.

>>Fortunately, my country is not particularly affected by strong disasters in the past.
But it is true that we are not safe from earthquake anymore.

>>But recently, it is discovered that we are not safe from earthquakes anymore.

These days, we experienced the big scale earthquake several times.

>>These days, we experience several earthquakes in a large scale.

We were effected big damage. So we have to prepare for upcoming disaster.

>>We can suffer from massive damage so we have to prepare for the upcoming disaster.