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2018-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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There are no special things to prepare for a disaster because we've don't had strong disaster yet. When strong typhoon is expected, we typically do taping to the windows to prevent a accident to break the window from the strong wind.

강사 첨삭

Hi Young! I am glad to know that disasters are less of your worries. You are very blessed. May you be able to share your goodwill to others who may need it. Anyway, you did a good job on your work today. You were able to use complex sentences by using conjunctions to deliver your thoughts. Keep up this good work!

~~T. Dee :)


There are no special things to prepare for a disaster because we\'ve don\'t had strong disaster yet.

>>There are no special things to prepare because we didn\'t have prior experience involving any strong disaster yet.
When strong typhoon is expected, we typically do taping to the windows to prevent a accident to break the window from the strong wind.

>>When a strong typhoon is expected, we typically tape the windows to prevent them from breaking because of the strong wind.

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