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2018-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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First, I want to buy all series books I'm collecting. And I'm planning to gather the air in the plastic bag and sell it in the first day of 2019. That is all the plans I have now. I never make many plans at once. Because I know I will forget it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

Thank you for taking the time today to practice your writing.

You have to expound on your plans during class.

I would very much like to hear about them.

Have a good holiday!

~~ Teacher Sharon

First, I want to buy all series books I\'m collecting.
>> First, I want to buy all the series books that I\'m collecting.
And I\'m planning to gather the air in the plastic bag and sell it in the first day of 2019.
>> I\'m also planning to gather air in a plastic bag and sell it on the first day of 2019.
That is all the plans I have now.
>> Those are all my plans at the moment.
I never make many plans at once.
>> I never make several plans at one time.
Because I know I will forget it.

>> That is because I know that I would forget them.

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