Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
Thank you for taking the time today to practice your writing.
You have to expound on your plans during class.
I would very much like to hear about them.
Have a good holiday!
~~ Teacher Sharon
First, I want to buy all series books I\'m collecting.
>> First, I want to buy all the series books that I\'m collecting.
And I\'m planning to gather the air in the plastic bag and sell it in the first day of 2019.
>> I\'m also planning to gather air in a plastic bag and sell it on the first day of 2019.
That is all the plans I have now.
>> Those are all my plans at the moment.
I never make many plans at once.
>> I never make several plans at one time.
Because I know I will forget it.
>> That is because I know that I would forget them.
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