homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Young! I hope you\'re having a great day. I can see that you have come a long way in terms of the grammar aspect of your sentences. You have very minimal slips but they can be forgiven because you are able to deliver the idea clearly. You may just have to work with choosing the right words in your sentences. Continue to have a great day!
~~T. Dee
I prefer to travel with someone than alone.
>>I prefer to travel with someone than going alone.
It \'s enough one person who have a same taste to travel.
>>It\'s enough for me to travel with one person who has similar preferences, like me, in terms of travelling.
After finishing our schedule, drinking some beers with companion at night is the best moment while traveling.
>>After finishing our trip, drinking some beer with my companion at night is the best moment when traveling.
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