homework

Hi Young! Thank again for completing your homework. Your work gave me a good picture of what your experience had been in the two cities of China. It\'s good to know that Shanghai exceeded your expectation. Regarding your sentence construction, I am glad to say that you are definitely going great. You just have to work on with the proper transition of your thoughts. Review on the use of conjunctions and how to join your sentences. Overall, you did a fine job. I am proud of you on this homework. Keep it up!

~~T. Dee

Shanghai is one of the most memorable place i have ever visited.

>>Shanghai is one of the most memorable places I have ever visited. 
because it was very different from my expectation.

>>It was very different from my expectation.
When i had visited Beijing , i felt that china was very dirty and using a toilet was very uncomfortable

>>When I had visited Beijing, another major city in China, I felt that China was very dirty.
because bottom of toilet\'s door was open to other people.

>>Using a toilet was very uncomfortable because the bottom of toilet\'s door was open where other people can see.
but Shanghai was clean unlike my memory and the buildings seems like Europe .

>>In contrast, Shanghai was clean unlike Beijing and the buildings seem like those in Europe .
The night side view had two different side view.

>>The night view offers two different perspectives.

one side looks like oriental style and other looks like western place.

>>One side looks oriental and other looks western.