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Hello Jin Young! Thank you for this. You\'re right, being wary about elders\' attention on you is quite uncomfortable. You can\'t be yourself. When I used to have sleep overs before, we went to a friend\'s house when the parents are either out of town or in another place.

- T. Beth

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I don\'t enjoy staying over at other people\'s house only in the case that there are parents in their house.

>>>> I don\'t enjoy staying over at other people\'s house especially in the case that their parents are home. 

>>>> OR: I don\'t enjoy staying over at other people\'s house especially when their parents are home.   

When conducting military service, I usually went to Seoul during day off in order to meet friends.

>>>>  CORRECT.

>>>> OR: When I was having my military service, I usually went to Seoul during my day off to meet friends.     

Although friend house was more comfortable than sauna and friend suggested staying over at his house to me, I almost didn\'t go to friend\'s house.

>>>> Although my friend\'s house was more comfortable than the sauna and my friend suggested me to stay over at his house, I almost didn\'t go to that friend\'s house.    

If I stayed over at his house, I had to consider my behaviors politely because of his parents.

>>>> CORRECT.

>>>> OR: If I stayed over at his house, I had to consider behaving politely because of his parents.      

Therefore, I usually went to sauna so that I didn\'t care about other\'s eyes.

>>>> OR: Therefore, I usually stayed over at the sauna so I didn\'t have to worry about how other\'s see me.    

Although sauna\'s facilities were uncomfortable, other\'s eyes were more uncomfortable to me.

>>>> CORRECT.      

However, if friend lives alone away from his parents, I will go to his house naturally because I can\'t sleep deeply in sauna because of surrounding noise.

>>>> OR: However, if my friend lived alone away from his parents, I would have gone to his house naturally because I couldn\'t sleep deeply in sauna due to the surrounding noise.