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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
You have been very clear in stating your opinion.
I also like it when you give examples.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think the best gift is money than anything.
>> I think money is the best gift more than anything else.
If I get something for gift, I can only get one thing.
>> If I get something as my gift, it\'s like I\'m only getting one thing.
But with money, I can buy anything I want.
>> Correct
That is the reason I think the money is the best gift.
>> That is the reason why I think that money is the best gift.
I always say money when mom ask me what I want for birthday/christmas gift.
>> I always tell my mom that I want money as a birthday or Christmas gift whenever she asks.
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