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2018-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Is there a special gift you like to get? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences It is simple gift. It is phone case. My phone case is not nice and pretty. So,I want to get a new phone. And I want to get a real speciaal gift, personal notebook computor. I think it will more comfortable than before I dom't have my personal notebook computer.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

Thank you for sharing your wish. I hope that it would be granted soon.

Have a good day!

~T. Kelly^^

Is there a special gift you like to get? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences
It is simple gift.

>> It is a simple gift.
It is phone case.

>> It is a phone case.
My phone case is not nice and pretty.
So,I want to get a new phone.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> I want to receive a new phone.
And I want to get a real speciaal gift, personal notebook computor.

>> I want to get a very special gift, like a personal notebook computer.
I think it will more comfortable than before I dom\'t have my personal notebook computer.

>> I think it will be very convenient to have a personal notebook computer.

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