Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
I had so much fun in our class.
I\'m really excited because I am also learning so many new things from you too.
It\'s also a good thing that we have some things in common, because it will help a lot when it comes to sharing opinions.
See you in class!
Here are some corrections from the composition you sent me.
By the way, you did well. ^^
~~t. Ally.
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In free time, I would like to go out watching a movie, especially SF or action movie.
In my free time, I like to go out and watch movies, such as: Sci- Fi or action movies.
The reason why I choose those kinds of movies is sound-system which let me be absorbed in a scene more realistically.
I like those kinds of movies because the sound effects it has allows me to feel like I\'m in the movie itself.
I expect this free talking class to train me to speak English any time with no troubles.
I expect this free talking class to train me to speak English any time with no trouble.
For my occupation as a receptionist, there are many cases to encounter foreigners as visitors unexpectedly and I want to give them proper instructions to solve their requests or complains.
Working as a receptionist, there are many cases in which I encounter foreign visitors unexpectedly, and I would like to be able to give them proper instructions and help them with their requests or complaints.
Furthermoer my final goal for English speaking is to make English presentation in front of audience and respond to their questions or opinions with no troubles.
Furthermore, my final goal in learning the English language is to be capable of doing English presentations in front of an audience and be able to respond to their questions and opinions with ease.
I cannot wait for next class to practice speaking English and hope to write or speak English with less errors and hesitation to translate my ideas in my head from Korean to English.
I cannot wait for our next class so I can practice speaking English more. I also hope to write or speak English with less errors and hesitations in translating my ideas from Korean to English.
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