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2018-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I think experience can be a great teacher in life. The experience teach us what can we do, and what we can't do. We learn lot's of things when we fail and succeed. I also learned a lot of things from my mistakes. So it is the reason why I think experience can be a great teacher in life.

강사 첨삭

Hi Seong Won!

I love your composition today.

It\'s carefully structured.

The sentences are very meaningful and clear.

Keep it up!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think experience can be a great teacher in life.
>> Correct
The experience teach us what can we do, and what we can\'t do.
>> Experience teaches us what can we do, and what we can\'t do.
We learn lot\'s of things when we fail and succeed.
>> We learn lots of things when we fail and succeed.
I also learned a lot of things from my mistakes.
>> Correct
So it is the reason why I think experience can be a great teacher in life.

>> So this is the reason why I think experience can be a great teacher in life.

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