homework

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for sending me a composition.

I enjoyed our class yesterday. ^^

It\'s nice to see that you have learned something from a movie you have watched.

I will be sending some corrections along with this reply.

I appreciate your effort in answering our homework.

~~t. Ally.

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Actually I don\'t watch the movie very often.

>> Actually, I don\'t watch movies very often.

I prefer to watch non-fiction story, such as documentary film and the movie which is based in real things that happened before.

>> I prefer to watch non-fiction stories such as: documentaries and movies which are based on real events.

I remember that when I was early 20 years old, I did like the movie \'Billy Elliot\'.

>> I remember when I was 20 years old, I watched the movie \"Billy Elliot\", and I liked it.

I think I watched several times.

>> CORRECT!

It was impressed that the main actor became successful dancer in the end, although his family couldn\'t support him financially.

>> I was impressed that the main character became a successful dancer in the end, despite not having any financial support from his family.

It\'s so touching in my mind that just normal boy\'s dream come true. It could effect to many people who want to make their goal.

>> It was so touching to see an ordinary boy\'s dreams come true. Seeing that can have a good effect on many people who want to achieve their goals.