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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this one. Independence is definitely necessary. However, there are some instances where you would really need other people\'s help. Taking the initiative to do things on your own is a good habit.
- T. Beth
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When child, I usually lean on other people\'s help even in the case that other people can\'t help me.
>>>> When I was a child, I usually lean on other people\'s help even in the case that they can\'t help me.
while growing up, I realized that this dependent habit was ruining my future, which have to be fixed for me to go forward when facing with adversity.
>>>> While growing up, I realized that this dependent habit was ruining my future and I have to fix it for me to go forward when faced with adversity.
Therefore, when facing with situation to need something, I try to solve these problem by myself.
>>>> Therefore, when faced with situations where I need something, I try to solve these problems by myself.
Also, I changed awareness on situation to take long time without other people\'s help into thinking that these times help me develop my ability.
>>>> Also, I changed my perspective on situations that would take a long time without other people\'s help by thinking that these times will help me develop my ability.
Although going forward alone is very difficult for the first time, it is more and more familiar to me and I can process problems alone without word that I implore other people to help me.
>>>> Although going forward alone is very difficult for the first time, it is more and more familiar to me and I can process problems alone without asking other people to help me.
Through these experience, I usually search solutions on problem in internet.
>>>> Through these experiences, I usually search solutions on problem in the internet.
>>>> OR: Through these experiences, I usually search solutions on problem online.
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