homework

Happy Day to you my dear [이름]!

You inspire me with this short essay that you wrote. I can see promise in your writing skill. You did very well. There were very little corrections in your work because it was written with great care. I just made it a tad better my replacing some words that are more appropriate to fully express your idea. It does not mean however that the words you have used are wrong, some words are just better to use in order to deliver an idea more clearly. Continue with this progress, [이름]! You make me proud.

~~T. Dee

My close friends often contact me to ask for an advice when they have a worry.

>>My close friends often reach out to me to ask for an advice when they have some troubles.
I entered the university one year later than others.

>> I entered the university one year later than my peers.
so my university friends are generally [이름]er than me.

>>This is why, my university friends are generally [이름]er than me.
I think this is a main reason they find me when they need advice to decide anything. 

>>I think this is the main reason why they go to me when they need some advice to decide on anything. 
I think the best way to help someone who feel stressful is that just hear and empathize with their story.

>>I think that the best way to help someone who feel stressed is just to hear and empathize with their story.
Sometimes i share my experience related to their problems.

>>Sometimes, I share some of my experience related to their problems.
 but my experience is not always right because the situation each person have is different.

>>But often, my experience is not always similar because the circumstances of each person is different.
 anyway, whatever i say they finally do according to what they want.

>>Anyway, whatever I say it is their decision if they would like to follow my advice.