homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you again for completing your homework. I am serious when I said before that you could be a good writer. Your writing makes me want to want to read more about you. As usual, I only made very little corrections. Check on them below:

I like to go to the concert.

>>I like going to concerts.
I often go to enjoy the music festival.

I>> often enjoy the music festivals
Watching a good concert inspires energy into my boring life.

>>Watching a good concert inspires  me and brings energy to my boring life.
I think it is a gift for me because it helps me to escape from daily routine and motivates me to live hard. 
>>I think that it is what I always gift for myself because it helps me to escape from my daily routine and motivates me to live more.