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Hi, [이름]!

It\'s so thrilling to read the compositions you send me.

Thank you for always being so open and honest. ^^

I appreciate that very much.

I also appreciate the effort you put into making your sentences longer.

You\'re lucky to have an understanding sister.

I hope you two stay close until you both grow old. ^^

Let\'s talk more about this in class.

~~t. Ally

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 I have a sister who is 3 years older than me.

>> CORRECT!

When I was young as a teenager, I used to read my sister\'s diary secretly.

>> When I was still in my teenage years, I used to read my sister\'s diary secretly.

I remember that I wrote a diary similar way to my sister\'s writing.

>> I remember that I wrote a diary in a similar way as my sister\'s.

That\'s kind of stealing her writing.

>> CORRECT!

I still don\'t know whether my sister knows about that I looked her note book.

>> To this day, I still don\'t know whether my sister know that I looked at her diary.

Even though she knew, she wouldn\'t tell anything to me, because she was so nice sibling to me. 

>> But even if she knew, she wouldn\'t have told me off because she was such a nice sibling to me.

Surprisingly, one of my old friends said I\'ve shown my sister\'s diary to her when we was young.

>> Surprisingly, one of my old friends said I\'ve shown my sister\'s diary to her when we were young.

But I don\'t remember about that.

>> But I can no longer remember that.

I feel sorry to my sister.

>> I feel sorry for my sister.

I haven\'t tole her that fact.

>> I still haven\'t told her about it.

But I believe, she would understand if she get to know that story.

>> But I believe she would understand if she got to know about it.