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2018-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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What type of political system governs in your country? South korea which is the Republic of Korea represent democratic republic. We have a president for the head of state, and there are several parties. The president is voted every 5years. I don't have enough knowledge of politics. I'm sorry about that just little writing. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you so much for being consistent in submitting your compositions. ^^

I hope you keep it up!

Here are some corrections to your sentences.

~~t. Ally

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South korea which is the Republic of Korea represent democratic republic.

>>South Korea represents a democratic republic.

We have a president for the head of state, and there are several parties.

>>We have a president as the of the state and there are several other parties below him.

The president is voted every 5years.

>>We elect a new president every 5 years.

I don\'t have enough knowledge of politics.

>>I don\'t have enough knowledge on politics.

I\'m sorry about that just little writing.

>>I\'m sorry for the short composition.

Thank you!

>> CORRECT!

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