homework
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Do you think all people in the world are equal and everyone deserves the same rights? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think all people in the world are equal and deserves good.
Because, we should not have a people discrimination.
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Do you think all people in the world are equal and everyone deserves the same rights? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think all people in the world are equal and deserves good.
>> I think all people in the world are equal and deserves to be treated fairly.
Because, we should not have a people discrimination.
>> So, we should not discriminate others.
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