Homework
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Essay: Describe the characteristics of a good parent. Give specific details to explain your views. Use your personal observations, experience, and knowledge.
Giod parents can trust their children and wait till they change their behaviors instead of being angry and blaming them for some mistakes.
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Hi there, James!
Your homework answer is short. I want you to make or add more sentences in explaining your answer.
Thank you for answering your homework.
-Teacher Shelly-
Essay: Describe the characteristics of a good parent. Give specific details to explain your views. Use your personal observations, experience, and knowledge.
Good parents can trust their children and wait till they change their behaviors instead of being angry and blaming them for some mistakes.
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