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2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> There are a lot of fake news online. If you read a news about your favorite personality, who or how do you seek for confirmation? This problem is also issued in Korean politics these days. Fake news without basis are alluring crowd and politicians are worried about these. So, they decided to request eliminating fake news in YouTube to Korean YouTube branch last week. With this action, they also are trying to amend laws about penalty on making or disseminating fake news. Despite these effort, however, fake news will not be never disappeared because of forces that want to manipulate crowd's psychology. So, people who don't want to be instigated by fake news must have own judgement standard. In my case, I usually subscribe progressive press and conservative press simultaneously in order not to look incident using biased view point.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. I agree with you. As a citizen, reading news, it is our responsibility to discriminate what to believe or not.

- T. Beth

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This problem is also issued in Korean politics these days.

>>>>   CORRECT.

>>>>  OR: This problem is also an issue in Korean politics these days. 

Fake news without basis are alluring crowd and politicians are worried about these.

>>>>  CORRECT.  

So, they decided to request eliminating fake news in YouTube to Korean YouTube branch last week.

>>>>  CORRECT.  

With this action, they also are trying to amend laws about penalty on making or disseminating fake news.

>>>>  CORRECT.  

Despite these effort, however, fake news will not be never disappeared because of forces that want to manipulate crowd\'s psychology.

>>>> Despite these efforts however, fake news will never disappear because of forces that want to manipulate the public\'s opinion.    

So, people who don\'t want to be instigated by fake news must have own judgement standard.

>>>>  So, people who don\'t want to be instigated by fake news must have their own judgement standard.   

In my case, I usually subscribe progressive press and conservative press simultaneously in order not to look incident using biased view point.

>>>>   In my case, I usually subscribe to progressive press and conservative press simultaneously in order not to look at the incident on a biased point of view.  

 

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