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2018-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The boy is loud. He shouts loudly. 2. Her English is fluent. She speaks English fluently. 3.Our mum was angry. She spoke to us angrily. 4. My neighbor is a careless driver. He drives carelessly. Dianne! You made mistake my sentence becouse of my poor pronounciation. I will give you my original sentences: Someday, I have asked her why are you joyful in the exam period, "Every student get stress for school testing unlike you." She said that she can come home earlier than usual day((you corrected this part)) and have more joyful time after examination with her friends than usual day. And we forgot new homework for words! Please give me two or three words then I will make some sentences using these words and explain the meaning of the(?) words to you

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Happy Hump Day!

I apologize for my mistake.

Anyway, here\'s the correction to your composition.

See you on Thursday! Have a lovely day!


_Teacher Dianne



1. The boy is loud. He shouts loudly.

>> correct
 2. Her English is fluent. She speaks English fluently.

>> correct
 3.Our mum was angry. She spoke to us angrily.

>> correct
 4. My neighbor is a careless driver. He drives carelessly.

>> correct

Dianne!

>> correct

 You made mistake my sentence becouse of my poor pronounciation.

>> You made a mistake with my sentence because of my poor pronunciation.
 I will give you my original sentences:

>> correct

 Someday, I have asked her why are you joyful in the exam period, 

>> One day, I have asked her why she was joyful in the exam period.

>> or: One day, I have asked her, \"Why are you joyful in the exam period?\" 
 \"Every student get stress for school testing unlike you.\"

>> \"Every student gets stressed during school test unlike you.\" 
 She said that she can come home earlier than usual day((you corrected this part)) and have more joyful time after examination with her friends than usual day. 

>> She said that she can come home earlier than the usual day (you corrected this part)) and have more joyful time after examination with her friends. (Oh, I\'m sorry if I didn\'t get the sentence right.)

 And we forgot new homework for words!

>> And we forgot our new homework about words!

Please give me two or three words then I will make some sentences using these words and explain the meaning of the(?) words to you

>> Please give me two or three words then I will make some sentences using these words and explain the meaning of the words to you.

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