homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
How was your work today? You've got a pretty tight schedule every day. haven't you? I can imagine that you sit wearing headset and talk with your student without a breaktime. But I feel you are always happy with your work fortunately. Take a rest!
ESSAY: What do you consider to be your best accomplishment in life? What are the things you have sacrificed before you reached this goal? Do you think it was worth it? Should you have a chance to change something in the past, would you change path?
I am still going on to accomplish my successful life.
If I have to tell you one thing, it is going to NewZleand when I was 25.
After Grauation college, I saved money and went to NZ to study English. I had stayed at NZ almost for 2 years.
I was very lonely and missed my friends. It was so hard time to me as I remember.
But When I look back that times, It was a valuable experience to me.
I had a chace to thingk over my life and circumstance. and also I met foreign kind freinds.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Happy hump day (Wednesday)! Thank you for your words of encouragement. I do have some break times, actually.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
How was your work today?
>>> Correct.
You\'ve got a pretty tight schedule every day, haven\'t you?
>>> Correct.
I can imagine that you sit wearing headset and talk with your student without a break time.
>>>I am imagining that you are sitting on your chair wearing a headset and talking with your student without a break.
But I feel you are always happy with your work fortunately.
>>> Fortunately, you always sound happy during your classes.
Take a rest!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What do you consider to be your best accomplishment in life? What are the things you have sacrificed before you reached this goal? Do you think it was worth it? Should you have a chance to change something in the past, would you change path?
I am still going on to accomplish my successful life.
>>> I still have a lot of things to accomplish in life.
>>> I still have to accomplish a successful life.
If I have to tell you one thing, it is going to NewZleand when I was 25.
>>> I want to share with you the time I went to New Zealand when I was 25 years old.
After Grauation college, I saved money and went to NZ to study English.
>>> After graduating college, I saved enough money and went to NZ to study English.
I had stayed at NZ almost for 2 years.
>>> I stayed in NZ for almost 2 years.
I was very lonely and missed my friends.
>>> Correct.
It was so hard time to me as I remember.
>>> It was a hard time for me as I remember it now.
But When I look back that times, It was a valuable experience to me.
>>> However, when I look back at that time, I can say it was a valuable experience for me.
I had a chace to thingk over my life and circumstance. and also I met foreign kind freinds.
>>> I had the chance to think about my life and circumstances. I also made friends with some foreigners.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene!
How was your work today?
>>> Correct.
You\'ve got a pretty tight schedule every day, haven\'t you?
>>> Correct.
I can imagine that you sit wearing headset and talk with your student without a break time.
>>>I am imagining that you are sitting on your chair wearing a headset and talking with your student without a break.
But I feel you are always happy with your work fortunately.
>>> Fortunately, you always sound happy during your classes.
Take a rest!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What do you consider to be your best accomplishment in life? What are the things you have sacrificed before you reached this goal? Do you think it was worth it? Should you have a chance to change something in the past, would you change path?
I am still going on to accomplish my successful life.
>>> I still have a lot of things to accomplish in life.
>>> I still have to accomplish a successful life.
If I have to tell you one thing, it is going to NewZleand when I was 25.
>>> I want to share with you the time I went to New Zealand when I was 25 years old.
After Grauation college, I saved money and went to NZ to study English.
>>> After graduating college, I saved enough money and went to NZ to study English.
I had stayed at NZ almost for 2 years.
>>> I stayed in NZ for almost 2 years.
I was very lonely and missed my friends.
>>> Correct.
It was so hard time to me as I remember.
>>> It was a hard time for me as I remember it now.
But When I look back that times, It was a valuable experience to me.
>>> However, when I look back at that time, I can say it was a valuable experience for me.
I had a chace to thingk over my life and circumstance. and also I met foreign kind freinds.
>>> I had the chance to think about my life and circumstances. I also made friends with some foreigners.
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