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2018-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> If someone invited you to an event but the person is not an intimate friend and you feel like not going, what would you do? What possible excuses would you say? When situation where I have to excuse regarding that I can't attend is happened, I usually use excuse regarding family anniversary. Although person who I'm not intimate with invite me, if I tell them that family's anniversary will be that day, they don't ask me to attend an event anymore. I think it seem to be best polite excuse when refusing little intimate people's request. But, when intimate people ask me something, if I want to refuse these, I tell them reason for refusing a request frankly. Although intimate friends of me ask me something constantly, when I refuse their request by frank reason, they understand my situation and are not sullen to me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. I appreciate the effort. Yes, I think giving a polite refusal in the good A white lie is also necessary in some cases.

- T. Beth

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When situation where I have to excuse regarding that I can\'t attend is happened, I usually use excuse regarding family anniversary.

>>>> When situations where I have to excuse myself from attending arise, I usually use family anniversaries as an excuse.   

Although person who I\'m not intimate with invite me, if I tell them that family\'s anniversary will be that day, they don\'t ask me to attend an event anymore.

>>>> Although the person who I\'m not intimate with invite me, if I tell them that family\'s anniversary will be on that day, they don\'t ask me to attend the event anymore.     

I think it seem to be best polite excuse when refusing little intimate people\'s request.

>>>> I think it seems to be the most polite excuse when refusing less intimate people\'s request.     

But, when intimate people ask me something, if I want to refuse these, I tell them reason for refusing a request frankly.

>>>> But when intimate people ask me something, if I want to refuse this, I tell them the reason for refusing the request frankly.   

Although intimate friends of me ask me something constantly, when I refuse their request by frank reason, they understand my situation and are not sullen to me.

>>>>  Although intimate friends of mine ask me something constantly, when I refuse their request with a frank reason, they understand my situation and are not sullen towards me.  

 

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