homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Irene!I
Frankly, I was a little bit tired this morning. but I can come over when I listened your bright voice. I love your energy and your positive thoughts. Thank you!
ESSAY: What will finally break the internet? What do you think will happen if the internet will suddenly stop working?
Internet controll and rule our life recently.
If internet stop working, our life will be chaos.
I can not call and recevie a call
I can not order stuffs through internet
I can not hear Radio.
I can not send or withdraw money.
And so on.
It will cause many disasters.
Especially, Korean will be shocked if it stop working, because Korea internet is the fastest and has most users in the world
I really happy to hear that internet stop working.
If internet break, I will go home right away and take a nap.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for those nice words [이름]. I will try my best each class to be a good conversation partner for you. Though, iI really like talking to you. ^_^
~T. Irene~
Hi! Irene!I
Frankly, I was a little bit tired this morning. but I can come over when I listened your bright voice.
>>> Frankly speaking, I was a little bit tired this morning but I can overcome this feeling when I listen to your lively voice.
I love your energy and your positive thoughts. Thank you!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What will finally break the internet? What do you think will happen if the internet will suddenly stop working?
Internet controll and rule our life recently.
>>> Recently, the internet has controlled and ruled our life.
If internet stop working, our life will be chaos.
>>> If the internet will stop working, our life will be in total chaos.
I can not call and recevie a call
>>> I won\'t be able to call and/or receive calls.
I cannot order stuffs through internet.
>>> I won\'t be able to order stuff through the internet.
I can not hear Radio.
>>> I won\'t be able to hear news on the radio.
I can not send or withdraw money.
>>> I won\'t be able to send or withdraw money.
And so on.
>>> Correct.
It will cause many disasters.
>>> Correct.
Especially, Korean will be shocked if it stop working, because Korea internet is the fastest and has most users in the world
>>> Most especially, Koreans will be in total shock if internet will stop working because the Korean connection is the fastest and with most number of users in the world.
I really happy to hear that internet stop working.
>>> I really would be happy to hear that the internet will stop working.
If internet break, I will go home right away and take a nap.
>>> If it happens, I can then just go home right away and take a nap.
~T. Irene~
Hi! Irene!I
Frankly, I was a little bit tired this morning. but I can come over when I listened your bright voice.
>>> Frankly speaking, I was a little bit tired this morning but I can overcome this feeling when I listen to your lively voice.
I love your energy and your positive thoughts. Thank you!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What will finally break the internet? What do you think will happen if the internet will suddenly stop working?
Internet controll and rule our life recently.
>>> Recently, the internet has controlled and ruled our life.
If internet stop working, our life will be chaos.
>>> If the internet will stop working, our life will be in total chaos.
I can not call and recevie a call
>>> I won\'t be able to call and/or receive calls.
I cannot order stuffs through internet.
>>> I won\'t be able to order stuff through the internet.
I can not hear Radio.
>>> I won\'t be able to hear news on the radio.
I can not send or withdraw money.
>>> I won\'t be able to send or withdraw money.
And so on.
>>> Correct.
It will cause many disasters.
>>> Correct.
Especially, Korean will be shocked if it stop working, because Korea internet is the fastest and has most users in the world
>>> Most especially, Koreans will be in total shock if internet will stop working because the Korean connection is the fastest and with most number of users in the world.
I really happy to hear that internet stop working.
>>> I really would be happy to hear that the internet will stop working.
If internet break, I will go home right away and take a nap.
>>> If it happens, I can then just go home right away and take a nap.
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