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Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. It is really hard to meet up often with friends as we grow older. Everybody would be busy doing his/her own stuff. Good luck with your thesis and celebrate with good movies and delicious food at your place afterwards.
- T. Beth
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These days, I couldn\'t have met friends because of preparing my thesis on Samsung\'s contest.
>>>> These days, I couldn\'t meet friends because of preparing my thesis for Samsung\'s contest.
So, we met each other in our school with no set schedule to meet.
>>>> So, we just bump into each other in school.
Because not making appointment to meet, we couldn\'t meet during long time, then we left with wistful emotion.
>>>> Because of not making an appointment to meet, we couldn\'t meet for a long time and we are left with a wistful emotion.
Because of this reason, I think making a appointment before meeting with friends is indispensable in order to hang out during long time.
>>>> Therefore, I think making an appointment before meeting friends is indispensable for us to hang out for a longer time.
Without appointment, one of the friends may have a another appointment and have to leave due to this.
>>>> Without a set appointment, one of the friends might have another schedule and has to leave due to this.
In other words, reason why I have to make appointments to meet friends is in order to hang out with friends during long time.
>>>> In other words, the eason why I have to make appointments to meet friends is in order to hang out with them longer.
I hope to finish my thesis on contest quickly and stay over at my house with bring in delicious foods.
>>>> I hope to finish my thesis for contest quickly and have a stay over at my house with delicious foods.
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