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2018-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Do you often make appointments to meet friends? Why do you think it's necessary to have such meetings? These days, I couldn't have met friends because of preparing my thesis on Samsung's contest. So, we met each other in our school with no set schedule to meet. Because not making appointment to meet, we couldn't meet during long time, then we left with wistful emotion. Because of this reason, I think making a appointment before meeting with friends is indispensable in order to hang out during long time. Without appointment, one of the friends may have a another appointment and have to leave due to this. In other words, reason why I have to make appointments to meet friends is in order to hang out with friends during long time. I hope to finish my thesis on contest quickly and stay over at my house with bring in delicious foods.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin Young. Thank you for this. It is really hard to meet up often with friends as we grow older. Everybody would be busy doing his/her own stuff. Good luck with your thesis and celebrate with good movies and delicious food at your place afterwards.

- T. Beth

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These days, I couldn\'t have met friends because of preparing my thesis on Samsung\'s contest.

>>>>  These days, I couldn\'t meet friends because of preparing my thesis for Samsung\'s contest.     

So, we met each other in our school with no set schedule to meet.

>>>> So, we just bump into each other in school.    

Because not making appointment to meet, we couldn\'t meet during long time, then we left with wistful emotion.

>>>> Because of not making an appointment to meet, we couldn\'t meet for a long time and we are left with a wistful emotion.    

Because of this reason, I think making a appointment before meeting with friends is indispensable in order to hang out during long time.

>>>> Therefore, I think making an appointment before meeting friends is indispensable for us to hang out for a longer time.    

Without appointment, one of the friends may have a another appointment and have to leave due to this.

>>>>  Without a set appointment, one of the friends might have another schedule and has to leave due to this.    

In other words, reason why I have to make appointments to meet friends is in order to hang out with friends during long time.

>>>>  In other words, the eason why I have to make appointments to meet friends is in order to hang out with them longer.    

I hope to finish my thesis on contest quickly and stay over at my house with bring in delicious foods.

>>>>   I hope to finish my thesis for contest quickly and have a stay over at my house with delicious foods.  

 

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