homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Your opinions are greatly appreciated!
Well, schools sometimes play significant roles in the upbringing of the students enrolled in these institutions. We cannot deny that some people got benefits and some experienced drawbacks from studying in a school with single gender classrooms or in a co-educational ones.
I got a lot of things to say about this topic and I believe it\'s the same in your case.
So, I hope we could talk more about these on Monday.
See you dear!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Teacher Shanee
Today is TGI Friday!
>>> Teacher Shanee, thank goodness it\'s Friday!
Have a splendid weekend!
In many countries today, parents are able to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools.
Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?
- I don’t think there have disadvantages later in life wherever you went.
>>> I don\'t think any of them will have disadvantages later in life.
Actually, I went a middle school of single-sex.
>>> Actually, I went to a single-sex middle school.
The single-sex school doesn’t affect anything to me, and also I was satisfied.
>>> And I can attest that it didn\'t affect me negatively. Rather, I was satisfied.
Addly, there are many people who went just normal schools and feel uncomfortable in social life.
>>> Moreover, there are many people who went to just normal schools but are socially awkward.
Those kinds of things are not problems of schools.
>>> OR: These things are not caused by the school.
It is problem of individual person.
>>> The problem is in the individual himself.
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