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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Seong Won!
It sounds like this fan is very interesting.
It\'s good that you are talking about your passion and interests.
You explain better that way.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
My best thing that happened today is I find lot\'s of new impormation about my favorit webtoon.
>> The best thing that happened to me today was finding a lot of information abut my favorite web toon.
I could read profiles of the characters, behind storys, questions and answers.
>> I could read profiles of the characters, their background, questions and answers.
I was so happy when I found this...
>> I was so happy when I found all of them.
I was also happy when I saw someone draw my favorite charactor at the fan cafe.
>> I was also happy when I saw someone draw my favorite character at a fan site.
The fan art was so high quality, that I almost thought I want to bow to the member who draw the fan art.
>> The fan\'s art was of high quality and I almost thought I wanted to show my respect to the member who drew the fan art.
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