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I\'m not sure that I\'ve understood about that question well.

>> I\'m not sure if I understood the question well.

Anyway, I would say there are not many differences between young generation\'s fight and old generation\'s fight.

>> Anyway, I would say there are not many differences between the young generation\'s fight and the old generation\'s fight.

My parent generation had lived in industrializing time in Korea.

>> My parents\' generation lived during the industrialization time in Korea.

Even though majority of people were very poor and not many thing to eat, there are potential to become a success in their job and they can dream for the future.

>> Even though the majority of people were very poor and did not have much to eat, they had great potential to become successful in their jobs and they can dream for their future.

These days, we have enough food and it became more convenient in many ways, and things are changing very fast such as technology and job industries.

>> These days, we have enough food and it has become more convenient in many ways. Things such as technology and the job industry are changing very fast.

From that changes, we need to follow it sensitively.

>> Because of these changes, we have to act mindfully.

Otherwise, it\'s easy to be behind the times.

>> Otherwise, it\'s easy to be left behind the times.

I think that can effect making problems to people.

>> I think that can affect many people in terms of making problems worse.

For examples, a generation gap or gender fight can be a kind of new issue.

>> For example, a generation gap or gender fight can be a new issue.

I believe young generation is struggling with more complicated fights.

>> I believe the young generation is struggling with more complicated fights.