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Hello Jin Young! Thank you once again for this one. I always appreciate your effort. Meeting local people is really great when traveling to new places. You can feel the authenticity of the culture through them. I hope you enjoy your next trip abroad, and experience more.
- T. Beth
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When I go on a trip, I\'m inclined to experience local culture where I visit.
>>>>> CORRECT.
So, rather going to tourist attraction, I usually visit local place like universities, small restaurants, and so on.
>>>>> So rather than going to tourist attractions, I usually visit local places like universities, small restaurants, and so on.
Especially, in the local restaurants where I visit during tour, I can feel atmosphere on this country\'s people.
>>>>> Especially when visiting local restaurants while traveling, I can get mingle with local people in the country.
For example, when I went to local restaurant in Boston in USA due to my friend who live in Boston taking me there, employees who work in there are very kind, but I feel these kindness as only formal action.
>>>>> For example, when a friend of mine took me to a restaurant in Boston in the US, the employees who work there were very kind. However, I felt like their kindness was for the sake of formal customer service.
So, I could think Americans are businessman who move by money thoroughly.
>>>>> So, I have thought Americans are businessmen who only work for money.
But, I went to Da Nang in Vietnam, people who live in there always smile and look like happy.
>>>>> But when I went to Da Nang in Vietnam, people who lived there always smiling and looked happy.
In addition, when I ask them how to get tourist attraction, they teach how I can get there in detail sincerely.
>>>>> In addition, when I asked them how to get to a tourist attraction, they sincerely gave me directions in detail.
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