homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Irene!
I took a trip last weekend with my husband and my puppy Nana.
This trip was for Nana. She lkes to run and ply on the grass.
My husband and I rent a villa and let Nana play run and smell different things (we call it 'Nose working').
I wish have a nice house with a garden for Nana someday.
ESSAY: If you were on a deserted island, what would you wish to have and why?
If I have to have one thing, I will have a lighter to fire.
If I have two things, I will have a lighter and my husband.
I bet, He will do his best to survive and take care of me.
Can I have more? I will have a flashlights, shoes, salt, blankets and so on.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for you message. It\'s nice to hear about your trip. You must really love your dog. ^_^ I have 4 dogs actually; an English bulldog, two Chihuahuas and a Shih Tzu. At times, I feel hard at taking care of them but they bring us joy actually. ^_^
~T. Irene~
Hi! Irene!
I took a trip last weekend with my husband and my puppy Nana.
>>> Correct.
This trip was for Nana.
>>> Correct.
She likes to run and play on the grass.
>>> Correct.
My husband and I rent a villa and let Nana play run and smell different things (we call it \'Nose working\').
>>> My husband and I rented a villa and let Nana play around. She ran and smelt all the different things around (we call it \'Nose work\').
I wish have a nice house with a garden for Nana someday.
>>> I wish to have a nice house with a garden for Nana someday.
ESSAY: If you were on a deserted island, what would you wish to have and why?
If I have to have one thing, I will have a lighter to fire.
>>> If I have to have one thing, I want to have a lighter to start fire.
If I have two things, I will have a lighter and my husband.
>>> If I am allowed to have two things, I would like to have a lighter and my husband with me.
I bet, He will do his best to survive and take care of me.
>>> Correct.
Can I have more?
>>> Correct.
I will have a flashlights, shoes, salt, blankets and so on.
>>> If I can have more, I would like to have a flashlight, shoes, salt, blankets and so on.
~T. Irene~
Hi! Irene!
I took a trip last weekend with my husband and my puppy Nana.
>>> Correct.
This trip was for Nana.
>>> Correct.
She likes to run and play on the grass.
>>> Correct.
My husband and I rent a villa and let Nana play run and smell different things (we call it \'Nose working\').
>>> My husband and I rented a villa and let Nana play around. She ran and smelt all the different things around (we call it \'Nose work\').
I wish have a nice house with a garden for Nana someday.
>>> I wish to have a nice house with a garden for Nana someday.
ESSAY: If you were on a deserted island, what would you wish to have and why?
If I have to have one thing, I will have a lighter to fire.
>>> If I have to have one thing, I want to have a lighter to start fire.
If I have two things, I will have a lighter and my husband.
>>> If I am allowed to have two things, I would like to have a lighter and my husband with me.
I bet, He will do his best to survive and take care of me.
>>> Correct.
Can I have more?
>>> Correct.
I will have a flashlights, shoes, salt, blankets and so on.
>>> If I can have more, I would like to have a flashlight, shoes, salt, blankets and so on.
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