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i think, Nowdays pollution is bad. because there are many people , they throw food , plastic and cigaret.

>> I think, nowadays, pollution is bad because there are many people who throw food, plastic and cigarette butts everywhere.

then maybe, pollution has will been bad

>> We can remove this sentence.