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Actually, I\'ve never thought about when I would be 70 years old.

>> CORRECT!

It will be 30 years later from now.

>> It will be 30 years from now.

It may be easy to live in a city than country because of convenience, but I want to live in a nature with many greens when I am old.

>> It may be easier to live in a city rather than a country because of the convenience, but I want to live in a place surrounded by nature, when I am old.

So I would like to live with garden.

>> So I would like to live in a place with my own garden.

If it\'s not my own, just live near the park is fine.

>> If it\'s not my own, simply living near the park is fine.

And living near by with a family and friends are my hope.

>> I also hope to live nearby my family and friends.

We can rely on each other and it wouldn\'t be lonely when we are getting older together. 

>> We can rely on each other and it wouldn\'t be lonely, since we will get old together.

Important things for me is stay calm and peaceful, even thought there are some difficulties.

>> The important thing for me is to stay calm and peaceful even though there will be some difficulties in life.

If I were 70s, I would like to be the person who can control the emotion.

>> If I were in my 70\'s, I would like to be the person who can control her emotions.

It means, want to be a wise elderly.

>> By that, I mean, I want to be a wise elder.