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Hello Jin Young. Thank you once again for this. As we grow older, traveling with parents would seem a bit awkward. But we should take the opportunity to do it while we can. We are too busy with our lives that we tend to forget that they are growing older.
- T. Beth
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Since I have had various traveling experiences for three years, it is the most memorable experience of mine to hang out with my mother in Yudeung Festival.
>>>> OR: Since I have had various traveling experiences for the past three years, it is the most memorable experience of mine to hang out with my mother in Yudeung Festival.
Yudeng Festival have been known in top 10 of attraction in Korea, which have shown beautiful lamps, floating on the river, at the end of the every years.
>>>> Yudeng Festival has been know as one of the top 10 attractions in Korea for its beautiful lamps and floats on the river every end of the year.
Because I didn\'t have a experience to hang out only with mother before that, it is very awkward for me.
>>>> Because I haven\'t experienced hanging out only with mother before that, it was very awkward for me.
However, my mother look happy due to walking with me after a long time, so I\'m so happy along with her.
>>>> However, my mother looked happy walking with me after a long time, so I was quite happy as well.
I took pictures of her with background having beautiful lamps and talk about my present and dream with her while wondering along the river.
>>>> I took pictures of her with beautiful lamps on the background and talked about my present situation and dreams with her while wandering along the river.
Although walking for long times, we weren\'t tired rather than gained strength.
>>>> Although we walked for a long time, we weren\'t tired but rather gained strength.
This traveling experience with mother can\'t be forgot for me.
>>>> This traveling experience with my mother is unforgettable.
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