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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene!
Iam worried about you and your place if typhoon hit and damage your place. I hope the typhoon pass through quickly.
Take care and watch your step when you go home after work.!
See you tomorrow!
ESSAY: What do you know about Euthanasia or 'mercy killing'? What do you think are the reasons why people choose to undergo this? Would you want to do it? Why or why not?
I am very positive with mecry killing.
I don't want suffer from my incurable disease and give hardships to my family in finantially and mentally.
Moreover,I don't want to pay for lying on a bed to expensive hospital cost. I think, It is useless thing.
When I decide to undergo euthanasia, I can donate my body before worse the disease.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Great afternoon! Thank you for your concern. I hope and pray that there won\'t be a lot of serious damages from this typhoon. ^_^
~T. Irene
Hi Irene!
I am worried about you and your place if typhoon hit and damage your place.
>>> I am worried that the typhoon may hit and damage your place hard.
I hope the typhoon pass through quickly.
>>> I hope the typhoon passes through quickly.
Take care and watch your step when you go home after work!
>>> Take care and watch your steps when you go home after work!
See you tomorrow!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What do you know about Euthanasia or \'mercy killing\'? What do you think are the reasons why people choose to undergo this? Would you want to do it? Why or why not?
I am very positive with mercy killing.
>>> Correct.
>>> I am pro mercy killing.
I don\'t want suffer from my incurable disease and give hardships to my family in financially and mentally.
>>> I don\'t want to suffer more from an incurable disease and make it hard for my family in terms of finances and mental turmoil.
Moreover, I don\'t want to pay for lying on a bed to expensive hospital cost.
>>> Moreover, I don\'t want to pay an expensive hospital bed just to lay down on.
I think, It is useless thing.
>>> I think, it is a useless expense.
When I decide to undergo euthanasia, I can donate my body before worse the disease.
>>> If I decide to undergo euthanasia, I can donate my some parts of my body before the diseases worsens.
~T. Irene
Hi Irene!
I am worried about you and your place if typhoon hit and damage your place.
>>> I am worried that the typhoon may hit and damage your place hard.
I hope the typhoon pass through quickly.
>>> I hope the typhoon passes through quickly.
Take care and watch your step when you go home after work!
>>> Take care and watch your steps when you go home after work!
See you tomorrow!
>>> Correct.
ESSAY: What do you know about Euthanasia or \'mercy killing\'? What do you think are the reasons why people choose to undergo this? Would you want to do it? Why or why not?
I am very positive with mercy killing.
>>> Correct.
>>> I am pro mercy killing.
I don\'t want suffer from my incurable disease and give hardships to my family in financially and mentally.
>>> I don\'t want to suffer more from an incurable disease and make it hard for my family in terms of finances and mental turmoil.
Moreover, I don\'t want to pay for lying on a bed to expensive hospital cost.
>>> Moreover, I don\'t want to pay an expensive hospital bed just to lay down on.
I think, It is useless thing.
>>> I think, it is a useless expense.
When I decide to undergo euthanasia, I can donate my body before worse the disease.
>>> If I decide to undergo euthanasia, I can donate my some parts of my body before the diseases worsens.
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