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Thank you for submitting another composition.

I truly enjoy your stories about your life.

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when i\'m middle school student, my sister went to cloth store with me. because of my birthday.

>>  When I was in middle school, my sister went to the clothing store with me, because it was my birthday.
 
there are store very fantastic, so i pick up cloth to my favorite cloth.

>> The store was fantastic, so I picked up some of my favorite clothes there.