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2018-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Motivation is very important, when people active a work. Don't have purpose and motiv people are don't work to active. Active work is one of the basic of success. 1. The United Nations Organization was founded in 1945 with the objective of averting another major world war. 2. Have you found the answer? 3. Every nation has its customs and traditions. 4. Have you seen my key? it's disappeared. 5. its about time you washed that coat. 6. Theirs might be snacks if you wait a bit. 7. ‘Where will he sleep?’ ‘Well, there's one bedroom.’ 8. Have you ever visited there place? 9. I have brought my piano. Where is yours ? 10. You're the most wonderful person I have ever met.

강사 첨삭

You got a good score Seong! Study more about the difference of THERE and THEIR.

THERE - There are, There might be, There is, There should be... (There + verb)

THEIR -  their place, their job, their room, their family... (Their + noun)

~~May~~

Motivation is very important, when people active a work.

>> Motivation is very important so that people would become active at work.
 Don\'t have purpose and motiv people are don\'t work to active.

>> People who  are not motivated and no purpose in life are not satisfied with their job.
 Active work is one of the basic of success.

>> Motivation and hardwork are the keys to success.
1. The United Nations Organization was founded in 1945 with the objective of averting another major world war.
>> CORRECT
2. Have you found the answer?
>> CORRECT
3. Every nation has its customs and traditions.
>> CORRECT
4. Have you seen my key? it\'s disappeared.
>> CORRECT
5. its about time you washed that coat.
>> CORRECT
6. Theirs might be snacks if you wait a bit.
>> 
THERE might be snacks if you wait a bit.
 7. ‘Where will he sleep?’ ‘Well, there\'s one bedroom.’
>> CORRECT

8. Have you ever visited there place?
>> Have you ever visited THEIR place?
 9. I have brought my piano. Where is yours ?
>> CORRECT

10. You\'re the most wonderful person I have ever met.

>> CORRECT

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