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2018-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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> Are you good at saying goodbye to friends or other people? I have a tendency where I can't finalize conversation with friends. So, although I have to do something I set schedule every morning, I can't finish conversation and listen whole story about my friends, also before uploading this homework, friends of mine call me in order to talk about how to live a life these day. I have works to conduct daily work of mine, nonetheless I listen their story, so that I can't finish my work to have to be done. I don't know whether acting like this is right or not, but it is clear that if other people feel like what I want to finish, they receive bad emotions. So, as I mention earlier, if not wanting other people to get hurt, I use a excuse with affair on household. But, this method isn't also used frequently because other people can notice that while thinking I make a fake story.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jin. Thank you for this. I know what you mean. You really want to avoid hurting others\' feelings. But if it\'s necessary, you don\'t have a choice. :D

- T. Beth

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I have a tendency where I can\'t finalize conversation with friends.

>>>>  I have the tendency to not finalize conversations with friends.

>>>> OR: I have the tendency to not finish conversations with friends.     

So, although I have to do something I set schedule every morning, I can\'t finish conversation and listen whole story about my friends, also before uploading this homework, friends of mine call me in order to talk about how to live a life these day.

>>>> So, although I have set a schedule to do something every morning, I can\'t finish my conversations and listening to my friends\' whole story. Before uploading this homework as well, friends of mine were calling me to talk about their lives these days.       

I have works to conduct daily work of mine, nonetheless I listen their story, so that I can\'t finish my work to have to be done.

>>>>  I have a lot of work to do but I listened to their stories so I couldn\'t finish all my tasks.     

I don\'t know whether acting like this is right or not, but it is clear that if other people feel like what I want to finish, they receive bad emotions.

>>>>  I don\'t know whether this behavior is good or not but it is clear that if other people knew that I wanted to end the conversation, they would feel bad.    

So, as I mention earlier, if not wanting other people to get hurt, I use a excuse with affair on household.

>>>>  So as I mentioned earlier, in order not to hurt others\' feelings, I use household affairs as an excuse.    

But, this method isn\'t also used frequently because other people can notice that while thinking I make a fake story.

>>>> However, I don\'t use this excuse frequently because other people can notice and would think I am making up stories.      


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